I complete this exercise over a long period of time between 6th and 21st March 2013.
I started out by experimenting with drawing individual pieces of fruit in my sketchbook with coloured pencil which I worked into with water soluble markers. Although I had hated the original exercise on stipples and dots, I found I enjoyed building up texture and colour with coloured stipples and dots. This worked particularly well for the texture of a clementine.
After this individual objects I drew several thumbnail sketches to try out different compositional ideas. I tried various open and closed compositions in landscape and portrait orientation.
I was quite pleased with the foreshortening of the banana and with the texture of the apple and enormous lemon. The clementine in the foreground didn't work so well - I obliterated the highlights and it ended up looking very flat and overworked. Reviewing the picture, I really wasn't happy with the composition and I also realised that the shadows were not dark enough as I'd fallen into the 'it's a white plate' trap. The other thing I realised was that the drawing I'd produced didn't have much to do with hatching to create tone. It was more about stipples and dots for texture. I thought I'd try again and produce a drawing about hatching this time.
I prefer this drawing to the fruit drawing. I like the bold colours and the close up visualisation of the interior of the peppers. I think the gloss of the exterior of the pepper could have been better captured in another medium. I found a beautiful example of this in a painting by Felix Vallotton which I have annotated in my sketch book.
I think that my drawing could be improved by simplification. Concentrating on one or two of the peppers and leaving some more background negative space would perhaps have been less invasive and provided more impact.
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